Got rid of the black lines and brought us closer to the front of the image. I might change the poses of the bodies. Any thoughts?
Visual Arts/Studio Research
MSEd in Art Education @ SUNY New Paltz Fall 2016
Got rid of the black lines and brought us closer to the front of the image. I might change the poses of the bodies. Any thoughts?
This is cool, I like the lighting as always! I do kind of feel like the people actually stand out too much. What if you try and add a couple of trees to the foreground? That might help break it up a bit and then I don’t think you would need to change the poses.
the figures seem more snapshot than some of the others, more like the diner scene…
perhaps a little more anonymity might be useful, these do seem portrait like. We can identify with the figures more if we don’t quite know what they look like, if that’s what you are going for…